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Week 2 of posting :D - This time with a bit of mistletoe :D

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This follows the prompt of 'Spock manages to catch Jim under the mistletoe.' only I was thinking of Spock taking a more subtle approach to stealing a kiss (I was kind of thinking 'Pre-Slash, with unrequited love on Spock's end)

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Date: 2013-12-08 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amiss.livejournal.com
Aw! This is so, so sweet.

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Date: 2013-12-08 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

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Date: 2013-12-08 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] s0mmerspr0ssen.livejournal.com
Oh my GOD, this is super-adorable, I love how you draw their noses, Spock's face especially is so precious. Absolutely lovely, thanks for sharing with us. :)
Edited Date: 2013-12-08 07:12 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2013-12-08 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Ah thank you! :D And nice of you to compliment the noses of all things heh

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Date: 2013-12-08 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plaktow.livejournal.com
I wonder if Jim realizes Spock is giving him a Vulcan kiss :) That is such a super cute thought! =^_^=

As for the art, you could pay attention to the length of their necks, and to the repeating pattern of the background. Also Jim's right hand is a bit thick? Otherwise you've got the body proportions correctly, and you have your own, distinct style of drawing - that's always a good thing :)

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Date: 2013-12-09 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

And yeah the MINUTE I posted this I thought 'OH GOD WHY DID I DRAW THEIR NECKS LIKE THAT??' But I was too lazy to change it. I used a SAI brush for the background, so that's why it repeating. Right hand? You the hand holding the glass? That's the left, right hand's not in the picture...but yeah it does look a bit big. I'm just gonna go with 'small glass' on that. Thanks so much for critiquing though, truly appreciate it.

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Date: 2013-12-09 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plaktow.livejournal.com
Erm, sorry, I meant "arm"... English isn't my native language :/

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Date: 2013-12-09 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Oh...well that's okay.
I was goIng for a thick sweater type deal and I guess it doesn't come across well enough. I do need to practice more, thank you :)

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Date: 2013-12-09 02:18 am (UTC)
ext_393041: perfect Spock (Default)
From: [identity profile] verizonhorizon.livejournal.com
It's lovely. Sneaky Spock! I like him in green a lot, btw. :)

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Date: 2013-12-09 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Thank you :D Yeah I feel that green works great for Spock too
Edited Date: 2013-12-09 05:11 am (UTC)

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Date: 2013-12-09 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild.livejournal.com
OMG, I love Jim's teddy-bear-snowperson sweater!

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Date: 2013-12-09 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Haha thank you :D

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Date: 2013-12-10 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tcroi.livejournal.com
Eeeh, adorable! I love the finger kiss and the bear snowman.

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Date: 2013-12-10 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
haha thank you :D

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Date: 2013-12-12 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tprillahfiction.livejournal.com
This is absolutely adorable! I love Jim's teddy-bear sweater and the yellow background and their finger kiss!

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Date: 2013-12-12 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Ahh thank you so much :)

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Date: 2013-12-20 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] romanse1.livejournal.com
Ah...the sneaky Vulcan kiss! : ) That is sooo cute.

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Date: 2013-12-20 06:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spomarani.livejournal.com
Thank you :3
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