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Date: 2013-12-08 08:26 pm (UTC)As for the art, you could pay attention to the length of their necks, and to the repeating pattern of the background. Also Jim's right hand is a bit thick? Otherwise you've got the body proportions correctly, and you have your own, distinct style of drawing - that's always a good thing :)
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Date: 2013-12-09 12:58 am (UTC)And yeah the MINUTE I posted this I thought 'OH GOD WHY DID I DRAW THEIR NECKS LIKE THAT??' But I was too lazy to change it. I used a SAI brush for the background, so that's why it repeating. Right hand? You the hand holding the glass? That's the left, right hand's not in the picture...but yeah it does look a bit big. I'm just gonna go with 'small glass' on that. Thanks so much for critiquing though, truly appreciate it.
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Date: 2013-12-09 08:30 am (UTC)I was goIng for a thick sweater type deal and I guess it doesn't come across well enough. I do need to practice more, thank you :)
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